I am a Year 6 student at Glenbrae School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Mr Nath.
Friday, 27 November 2020
Wednesday, 25 November 2020
Tuesday, 24 November 2020
Santa on the beach on Christmas
One day there was a man that wanted to dress up as Santa for Christmas. But then he just remembered that Christmas was in summer.
He said to himself “ it would be really hot but it’s Christmas I should just wear it for my family.” So he wore it and he went to the beach because that was a good place to be on a hot Christmas.
He arrived at the beach and was happy to see his family. After giving hugs and kisses to his family. He got his chair from his car and laid down on it. But when he got on the sand he quickly ran close to the sea and put his chair down and sat down.
He said “ He liked the sand because it was soft and golden. When he laid down and saw the sky and said “WOW the sky is so beautiful.” He then said “ I can hear the waves splashing me and the air blowing towards me which is really nice and
relaxing.
He loved the air because he was so hot in his Santa costume but the air was also blowing the sand in his mouth.
Then he looked at the sea and he heard the sea moving and stuff. He then fell asleep for 1 hour and then finally his niece came to wake him up to come and eat.
He said “ okay, Ohhh I can smell the BBQ. Then he packed up and also said “wow the taste of this food is yum” so he ate more.
Then they all went home because it was dark and went to sleep.
I hope you enjoyed my story because I know I did.
Friday, 20 November 2020
Mana the protector.
One day there was a woman that was at home thinking of how proud she was about all the things she did until now. Mana was one of the protectors of the world. Yes there are other protectors. When Mana was a little girl she wanted to protect the world from bad things.
Let’s just say if there was a monster Mana would go and defeat it. Of course Mana was a little girl when bad things happened and she already knew that so she did some practise with the old man but he was once a protector of the world so he knew how to fight. His name was Master Gab but Mana just called him Master because Master Gab didn’t like her using his real name.
So over all the years Mana had training with Master she was ready at the age of 27 but sadly Master died right when Mana was ready to protect the world.
So she started defeating bad monsters, evil people and all the bad things and lived happily ever after training other kids so they can be ready to protect the world from evil things.
Thursday, 19 November 2020
Wednesday, 18 November 2020
The famous little girl.
One day there was a little girl named Bella, That is 10. She is famous for acting and singing. She didn’t love singing but then she decided that she could try. So she tried and tried and she got the hang of it. That’s because she never gave up and that’s how she became famous.
Then she was invited to a show to act in and she was amazing. She was tired after all the things she’s been doing and so she went home and straight to bed. When she got on bed she fell asleep as soon as she jumped on the bed.
But when she fell asleep she fell into deep sleep. After 1 hour she wakes up from her bedroom and then dad finds her but when he saw her he said”Excuse me why are you in my house” she said “what do you mean?” Afterwards the little girl tries to convince that she is his daughter.
After the man still isn’t convinced but still lets the girl stay. Then she realises that if her dad doesn’t remember her then is she not famous . but then she was like”ehh who cares I’m so tired so I want some rest”, so she went back to sleep and woke up finding her dad and other people standing next to her but in the hospital. She asked all of them”where am I?” Dad says “you're at the hospital because we thought something happened to you but you're fine.” she says i'm still famous?” Dad says “ yes you're still famous, why? She says never mind.”
When she was fine it was time to go back home then the famous little girl said “How long have I been sleeping?” Dad says “ five whole hours.” Five whole hour” she said in a high voice. She thought in her head wow so short before. But then went to concerts and acted in other moves.
Then she lived happily ever after in a big mansion being famous.
I hope you enjoyed my story because I loved it.
Tuesday, 17 November 2020
Monday, 16 November 2020
Thursday, 12 November 2020
Wednesday, 28 October 2020
Friday, 16 October 2020
Wednesday, 16 September 2020
My picture prompt story
One day me and my daily went on a vacation because we didn’t really go out all the time. I was so excited because my dad said that we were going to the beach. When we arrived it was so beautiful, I felt like I was in heaven. I could see the blue,shining and cold ocean.
I also saw a hot,bright sun shining upon us. The best thing I saw was the blue sky with the sun. It was amazing. I could smell the fresh air going through my nose. I could also smell the yummy food we brought.
I could taste the yummy food we made. I also could taste the sand that somehow came in my mouth. I can hear the waves splashing and the leaves smashing together.
I could also hear the beautiful birds singing. So it was time for me to go for a swim. I hated the beaches that had waves but I was bored.I could feel the heavy,big wave splashing on top of me. I hated it when the waves went on top of me because I drown. It was for us to go so I got changed.
I hope you enjoyed my story because I know I did.
Thursday, 27 August 2020
Thursday, 20 August 2020
Thursday, 23 July 2020
Wednesday, 22 July 2020
Friday, 3 July 2020
Thursday, 2 July 2020
My fun day writing
Tuesday, 30 June 2020
My Mini castle picture prompt story.
Thursday, 25 June 2020
My Winter writing
I can see the far away mountain with snow on it. I can taste the fresh smell of the air blowing in my face. I can smell my perfume on my t-shirt.
I can also smell my lunch in my bag I bought for the walk. I can hear the wind blowing everywhere that I got so cold. I can smell the flowers that were well hidden in the grass and also I can smell the hot cocoa that I made to make me warm.
Wednesday, 24 June 2020
23 degrees and 5 min.
Only day there was a man who was struggling to climb an enormous mountain to try and find his professor. There was a big storm like a giant was breathing that his breath was so cold the storm got colder and colder and also stronger. He fainted on the snow from the freezing cold storm and was thinking of his professor because the professor was like a father to the man that was struggling.
He flashed back where he was in university where the professor was still teaching. He was teaching his students and when he finished he marked the paperwork from the students and the man that fainted got it right. The answer was 23 degrees and 5 minutes. Then he saw the number 23 everywhere.
The date was 23 of may the 5th month. His clock stopped at 5: 23 hour. Then he got crazy and tried to figure out what was the answer to everything he did and he did. He got more crazier and wrote a lot of things. But then he was gone. He left everything to the man who fainted because he was like family.
Years went by and the man who fainted was the same age as the professor and followed his footsteps to see any evidence from all the professors' work and that’s how he ended up in the snowy storm. But then he woke up and saw the professor. He was so amazed he thought that he died but he didn’t then he heard his mates that came along with him.
I hope you enjoyed my story because I know I did.
Monday, 11 May 2020
Recount writing about what I did for mothers day
Saturday, 9 May 2020
My mothers day acrostic poem
Thursday, 7 May 2020
My story about The king's birthday
The king went over to the garden where the Royal gardeners. They were picking flowers. Then the king asked them “ do you know what day it is today” they said “ it’s Friday your majesty” while they were cutting roses.
Then he went to the kitchen where the Royal cooks were baking a cake. He asked the Royal cooks the same question he asked the Royal gardeners and they said “it’s baking day your majesty” as they were baking the cake.
He then went into the courtyard and asked the Royal Menders “ do you know where the Queen is?” The Royal menders answered and said no, your majesty. Then he went back to his throne and said to his Royal Footman “ go and find the Queen I have something to tell her”.
The king waited on his throne all morning for the Queen to but she didn’t come. When it was lunch time the bell rang and the king walked to the Banquet hall alone. He was very upset because no one remembered his birthday. His Royal Footman opened the door for him. “Surprised” the banquet hall was full of people. The flowers from the royal gardeners were everywhere. There was a banner hanging on the wall that said Happy birthday.
There was a huge cake on the table for the king. Everybody was cheering and clapping. The king was on his chair and looked if the Queen was on her chair but she wasn’t there so the king said “ where is she” he wondered when suddenly the cake exploded in front of the king. BOOM!!!!
Then the king saw that the Queen was surprising him for his birthday so she sang him happy birthday. The end.
I hope you enjoyed my story about the king’s birthday. Stay home and stay safe
Wednesday, 6 May 2020
My mothers day letter
Thank you for everything you have done for me. Thank you for giving birth to me. Thank you for always looking after me until now. Thank you for taking me to school when dad was busy with work. I wouldn’t be writing this card to you if I wasn’t born so I just thank you for that. Thank you for always being there for me and Fred. Please forgive me for being naughty and lazy. I promise you that when you and dad grow up I’m going to look after you two because you and dad have been looking after me and fred for a very long time. I thank you for always making sure that we were safe. I love you 50 million mum.
From your only daughter Irene
Monday, 4 May 2020
Saturday, 2 May 2020
My picture prompt story
Thursday, 30 April 2020
My sentance challenge
- the cat ran akross the road to get to da other sid
- the old man went to the supermarket to by sum food
- i miss goin 2 skool and seeing all my frends
- my favourite subject at school is writting.
- da bird flew throw the sky and landed on a tree
- i whent 4 a walk wif my family to get sum fresh ear
- i whent to da park and saw lots of kidds playin
- i went to da movies and got popkorn to eat
- i hav been playing lots of fun gams with my family at home
- i luv doing werk on my chromebook
Wednesday, 29 April 2020
How Kiwi saved the forest
- What is the name of the guardian of the birds?
- What is the name of the guardian of the trees?
- What was eating the trees to cause them to die?
- How did the guardians want the birds to save the trees?
- What was the tui scared of?
- Why didn’t the pukeko want to live on the forest floor?
- Why did the Kiwi agree to live on the forest floor?
- What did they say the kiwi needed to grow?