The spooky house

One night I was wandering in the peaceful forest. It was cold but then it was like i was freezing but i wasn’t, I just imagined it. I was still walking until I saw a spooky and dark house. I was so scared but I wanted to be brave, so I   went inside. 

It was so creepy to go in but I already did. I looked outside and saw heaps of leafy trees. I grabbed my phone and turned on my flashlight and saw a damp towel. I was calm and everything was quiet outside until the weather became gloomy.

I was really scared because I was lonely. Then I saw a terrifying wolf that ran wild past the house. It was like it was chasing something. Then I fell down and found a hidden door to go down.I was about to go in but it was 6 am in the morning so I had to go back home before my parents saw that I was gone  

I hope you enjoyed my terrifying and spooky story.

The Lone Figure

"A lone figure trudged along the road.

The sun was warm, and the figure felt the comforting warmth of the sun’s rays as they shone down from the sky.

It looked like the weather was about to change suddenly as the clouds gathered above the distant peaks of the mountain range.

To be caught in the chaos of a mighty storm is not a pleasant experience. The lone figure’s slow walk became a run; if he didn’t find safety soon who knew what might happen…"

Can you describe what might happen next?

This is what I came up with:
The lone figure saw some trees nearby so he ran there. Before the storm was about to start the lone figure saw someone under a tree. He sneakily went behind the tree and looked if he or she was okay. He thought to himself if he could be brave to talk to the person under the tree. He bravely went around the tree and saw the little girl crying because she was scared of the storm. She was really scared because whenever the storm hit it would be so loud, fast and big. So they met each other and waited patiently for the storm to go away. When the storm finished, they walked around to look for food. Then they became good friends.