I am a Year 6 student at Glenbrae School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Mr Nath.
Thursday, 2 July 2020
My fun day writing
Yesterday the whole school was having fun playing and also not doing any work. Before we played games we were supposed to the hall to sort out the lines. We are all in house lines likeR1 or R2. The r stands for rata. There are 4 houses and they are rata, kauri, nikau and kowhai. They all have colors red is rata, kowhai is yellow, nikau is blue and kauri is green.
Everybody was supposed to come in their house colours like me. I was in rata and I was wearing red. We were all split into 2 teams like R1 or R2. I was in R2. There were four games. The 1 one was to capture the flag done by Miss Kyee and Miss Smith. The second game was the three legged race done by Whaea Sangita. The 3rd game is Rob the nest done by Mr Nath and the last game is Ant form done by Mrs Tofa and Mrs Forsyth.
The winner was kowhai. I was happy because we all had fun. My favorite game was the three legged race because we had to sing a song as loud as we could. I had so much fun.
I hope you enjoyed my writing because I know I did.
Tuesday, 30 June 2020
My Mini castle picture prompt story.
Hidden behind the maze of branches stood a miniscule, enchanted castle. It was so easy to miss among the towering trees. Miniscule means something small like the castle. It was like the whole world was humongous except for the castle. It was like there was a mouse that lived in there because it was mini.
I thought that castles are taller than trees and they are but what I’m talking about right now is way smaller. Anyone could have stepped on the mini castle but couldn’t because they were huge and the castle was mini. I picked it up because I was the only one that saw it and went home with it.
Then I heard little screams. I wondered who had a small voice and was screaming then I put the castle close to my ear and heard voices. I opened the door and saw mini people. They were screaming because they thought that I’m going to eat them but then they said” please please don’t eat me” and I said “ I’m not going to you” then they were very confused but then I went to my sisters room and put them in a doll's house.
Even though nothing worked like the tv they were still pleased that they didn’t get eaten. Then they were happy to live with us because we didn’t eat them. That would have been gross. Then I was happy because I got to smash their old castle because it was smelly and old. But they did enjoy what we did, give them a new home and a new castle. {doll house}
I hope you enjoyed my story because I know I loved it.
Thursday, 25 June 2020
My Winter writing
I can hear the birds singing beautifully on the trees. I can see the skies reflection in the little puddle on the path. I can feel the fresh air blowing in my face. I can also feel the grass touching my legs as I walk past.
I can see the far away mountain with snow on it. I can taste the fresh smell of the air blowing in my face. I can smell my perfume on my t-shirt.
I can also smell my lunch in my bag I bought for the walk. I can hear the wind blowing everywhere that I got so cold. I can smell the flowers that were well hidden in the grass and also I can smell the hot cocoa that I made to make me warm.
I can see the far away mountain with snow on it. I can taste the fresh smell of the air blowing in my face. I can smell my perfume on my t-shirt.
I can also smell my lunch in my bag I bought for the walk. I can hear the wind blowing everywhere that I got so cold. I can smell the flowers that were well hidden in the grass and also I can smell the hot cocoa that I made to make me warm.
Wednesday, 24 June 2020
23 degrees and 5 min.
Only day there was a man who was struggling to climb an enormous mountain to try and find his professor. There was a big storm like a giant was breathing that his breath was so cold the storm got colder and colder and also stronger. He fainted on the snow from the freezing cold storm and was thinking of his professor because the professor was like a father to the man that was struggling.
He flashed back where he was in university where the professor was still teaching. He was teaching his students and when he finished he marked the paperwork from the students and the man that fainted got it right. The answer was 23 degrees and 5 minutes. Then he saw the number 23 everywhere.
The date was 23 of may the 5th month. His clock stopped at 5: 23 hour. Then he got crazy and tried to figure out what was the answer to everything he did and he did. He got more crazier and wrote a lot of things. But then he was gone. He left everything to the man who fainted because he was like family.
Years went by and the man who fainted was the same age as the professor and followed his footsteps to see any evidence from all the professors' work and that’s how he ended up in the snowy storm. But then he woke up and saw the professor. He was so amazed he thought that he died but he didn’t then he heard his mates that came along with him.
I hope you enjoyed my story because I know I did.
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